Guide Lines https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/t1821 Runboard| Guide Lines en-us Thu, 28 Mar 2024 22:15:30 +0000 Thu, 28 Mar 2024 22:15:30 +0000 https://www.runboard.com/ rssfeeds_managingeditor@runboard.com (Runboard.com RSS feeds managing editor) rssfeeds_webmaster@runboard.com (Runboard.com RSS feeds webmaster) akBBS 60 Re: Guide Lineshttps://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12621,from=rss#post12621https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12621,from=rss#post12621you are so very welcomenondisclosed_email@example.com (libramoon)Thu, 24 May 2012 22:43:39 +0000 Re: Guide Lineshttps://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12615,from=rss#post12615https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12615,from=rss#post12615hey libra, so instead of writing being an axe for the frozen sea within in us (kafka), you envision it as a shot gun blast, albeit one which is survivable. but that's only step one. the attention grabber. lol now that i've wounded you, here let me help. a little tlc and strategy. then let the imagination roam free. of course, the way you said it, it sounds a lot better! thanks for posting your ars poetica, libra. nondisclosed_email@example.com (Katlin)Thu, 24 May 2012 17:47:25 +0000 Re: Guide Lineshttps://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12605,from=rss#post12605https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12605,from=rss#post12605I can go with your guide lines. All our guides keep a little in front and maybe to the side. Terenondisclosed_email@example.com (Terreson)Wed, 23 May 2012 15:18:13 +0000 Re: Guide Lineshttps://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12577,from=rss#post12577https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12577,from=rss#post12577whom indeed? thanks for liking and enthusiasmnondisclosed_email@example.com (libramoon)Mon, 21 May 2012 19:47:23 +0000 Re: Guide Lineshttps://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12572,from=rss#post12572https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12572,from=rss#post12572Very cool, Libra. I love the first three lines -- hit the gut indeed. quote:Lead with the gut shot -- Cruel, hard -- survivable but never forgotten. Survivable -- yikes. Also dig how you subtly remind your reader that memories are selected, and not to be taken for granted. Love the imperative tense throughout -- well, almost throughout. You leave it at the end. I hope we can follow your guidelines to healing the world. Who's going to pull the trigger? nondisclosed_email@example.com (vkp)Mon, 21 May 2012 16:20:15 +0000 Guide Lineshttps://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12558,from=rss#post12558https://bdelectablemnts.runboard.com/p12558,from=rss#post12558Guide Lines     Lead with the gut shot -- Cruel, hard -- survivable but never forgotten. Carry through with simple, solid strategy, a call to action heart to heart. Now, we engage the mind. Select memory with care. Fully develop narrative imagery. Weave a side door into the neural web, opening paths to vistas, euphoric explorations, free at last.   First pain then salve and preparation then imagination Our Universe expandsnondisclosed_email@example.com (libramoon)Sat, 19 May 2012 18:38:07 +0000