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Come Summer


like a hound's tongue, loosely
hung between the bayonets
and tombstones of his teeth

like a slack-keyed
island melody

like a sun-splayed swimmer
in the sand, still jostled
by the sea

Last edited by Christine98, Jul/11/2013, 10:05 am
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Re: Come Summer


Some very good imnages here.

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Thanks tere,

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Hi Chris,

I, too, enjoyed the images in this poem, but I also really enjoyed the sound work. It is fun to read outloud, savoring the interplay of consonants and vowels. The two together, image and sound, make for a lush reading that captures the sensuous essence of summer for me.
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Thanks Kat.

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