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current jam


work and love
expression and assimilation
need for food, air, stimulation
ideation, imagination, succor
self-aware cells, each with place
and passion
busy interchange
at market and field
combine, wielding power, grow
beyond boundaries
permeable to trade, elation
creative generation
each lives to give
essence


infusion of starlight in my brain


deadly sweet sister howls into windy canyon sad chants ricochet






Marionette danse
Purple witch of spindly wood
bony enchantment
caresses soldier boy
he grows in appreciation
M'Dame, M' Lady, blessing strokes,
charade of bonny play
Look! Old potty rabbit hops
center stage
weary wilder of symphony
choreo-fleet, chiaroscuro
gentle Pierrot laughs
strings a-jerk, akimbo
thrush in plume ready to bloom
just before the denouement, the riddle.
How brash the Moon
How cast away the Star
How close the moment
performance to applause
childish phase unveiled
balanced on the head
of a pose

warm, resonant purr
catch my aha
my epiphany
my cultivated air of mystery
mist armors me
defense of camouflage
eye to dream

semiotic gestalt
but a holographic aspect

caught up in love, in lust
give up the world to follow me hormones
we humans forget
'tis our nature to do
open wide to where we once belonged

Bertholt and Muriel kiss fleet aye to eyes
wood palm arabesques
zoom back into throng
the very pain of life a Holiday song
metaliminal passion play in several actions
foggy notions in robes of myst
sanctity of choice
love for your supper
love so you won't be a whore
burn through fog to clearly witness
limbic video bliss
mutually assured derision
the antithesis of alien
ps and qs
pleasing cues
amusing pleasantries
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Re: current jam


Whoa! How you syntax like this, so to speak, I wish I could and know I can't. This amounts to an order of reckoning that seems so familiar. How do you do this thing? Or maybe I get it after all.

Libra, this poem is stopping me, making me speechless. I could say something smart and it would sound stupid in my ear. This is something special. This is a poem.

Tere
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Not yet; but it's getting there (I hope).
Oct/9/2010, 9:51 pm Link to this post Send Email to libramoon   Send PM to libramoon Blog
 
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second pass


Marionette danse
Deadly sweet sister
howls from windy canyon
sad chants ricochet
infusion of starlight
Purple witch of spindly wood
bony enchantment
caresses soldier boy
He grows in appreciation
M'Dame, M' Lady, blessing strokes,
charade of bonny play
Look! Old potty rabbit hops
center stage
weary wilder of symphony
choreo-fleet, chiaroscuro
gentle Pierrot laughs
strings a-jerk, akimbo
thrush in plume ready to bloom
just before the denouement, the riddle.
How brash the Moon
How cast away the Star
How close the moment
performance to applause
childish phase unveiled
balanced on the head
of a pose

warm, resonant purr
catch my aha
my epiphany
my cultivated air of mystery
mist armors me
defense of camouflage
eye to dream

caught up in love, in lust
give up the world to follow me hormones
semiotic gestalt
a holographic aspect
we humans forget
'tis our nature to do
open wide to where we once belonged

Bertholt and Muriel kiss fleet aye to eyes
wood palm arabesques
zoom back into throng
the very pain of life a Holiday song
metaliminal passion play in several actions
foggy notions, robes of myst
limbic video bliss

love for your supper
love so you won't be a whore
burn through fog; clearly witness
mutually assured derision

the antithesis of alien
ps and qs
pleasing cues
amusing pleasantries
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Yes even more so to your second pass. Seems you excised what you must have decided is extraneous to the poem. I too think its real energy comes through with where it starts the second time around. Good stuff, Libra. I think I get why you put it in Ateliers. And so many lines coming like fun to the brain.

Tere

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Marionette danse
Sad canyon howls
from deadly sweet sister
chants ricochet
infusion of starlight
Bony sorcery
Purple witch of spindly wood
caresses soldier boy
He grows in appreciation
M'Dame, M' Lady, blessing strokes,
charade of bonny play
Look! Old potty rabbit hops
center stage
weary wilder of symphony
choreo-fleet, chiaroscuro
gentle Pierrot laughs
strings a-jerk, akimbo
thrush in plume ready to bloom
just before the denouement, the riddle.
How brash the Moon
How cast away the Star
How close the moment
performance to applause
childish phase unveiled
balanced on the head
of a pose
 
warm, resonant purr
catch my aha
my epiphany
my cultivated air of mystery
mist armors me
defense of camouflage
eye to dream
 
caught up in love, in lust
give up the world to follow me hormones
semiotic gestalt
a holographic aspect
we humans forget
'tis our nature to do
open wide to where we once belonged
 
Bertholt and Muriel kiss fleet aye to eyes
wood palm arabesques
zoom back into throng
the very pain of life a Holiday song
metaliminal passion play in several actions
foggy notions, robes of myst
limbic video bliss

love for your supper
love so you won't be a whore
burn through fog; clearly witness
mutually assured derision

the antithesis of alien
ps and qs
pleasing cues
amusing pleasantries
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