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wind song
more like a butterfly than a bumblebee
more like pollen caught in drifting breeze
dervishly dancing eternities, floating magnetic seas,
singing to ease scattered securities, lonely insanities,
falling into my song
scattering hybrid seeds
wanting to bend your needs
into choral release, real ease
longed for realities
if you would sing along
harmonize with the breeze
the trees, the bees,
and me
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May/31/2011, 5:42 pm
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Re: wind song
Think I am getting the poetic sense of you, Libra. "Dervishly dancing eternities," what a fine phrase that is. "the trees, the bees,/ and me." Yes again.
I wager you work this into one of your complexioned poems.
Tere
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Jun/1/2011, 7:25 pm
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Re: wind song
Hi Libra,
I think your use of "song" in the title is very apropos: So many long "e" sounds, punctuated by the song/along rhyme. I especially like the opening lines:
"more like a butterfly than a bumblebee
more like pollen caught in drifting breeze
dervishly dancing eternities"
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Jun/5/2011, 11:25 pm
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